What can you see now?
The darkness is all around.
Hush of night surrounds.
Hush of night surrounds.
Then light, a streak on horizon.
A rooster is ruffled.
A rooster is ruffled.
Its cawing, the silence breaks.
Dreamy eyes, shut tight.
Dreamy eyes, shut tight.
Dreaming love’s dreams, sublime.
On lips, a smile.
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Nice. I like it. It progressed as a story, just like it should. Has imagery. It’s an original topic. Great job. And thanks for trying my new styles. 🙂
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Thanks so much for going through the Haiku and providing me with your feedback. I have just started writing Haikus and have got absolutely besotted with them. Love the way A Haiku aims to provide that one moment of eternal bliss, something akin to a fragrance that comes with a whiff and then lingers on in the mind for a while. Your comments mean a lot to me. I like the style developed by you; makes it possible to weave together a chain of thoughts in the form of a story, something which I have attempted to do here. Thanks once again. 😊🙏
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Thank you for the kind words. 🙂
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Truly lovely. This is a perfect example of multiple haiku that express a similar theme or montage of images. The haikai form is known as the haiku sequence.
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Thank you so much for your appreciation. These help me a lot in understanding the concepts of Haiku writing better and improving my skills. Really appreciate the detailed comment. 😊🙏
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You’re most welcome. 😉
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I have never written a Haiku Sequence before, I am now inspired! 😊
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