#ShiRensaHaiku Dawn

What can you see now?
The darkness is all around.
Hush of night surrounds.

Hush of night surrounds.
Then light, a streak on horizon.
A rooster is ruffled.

A rooster is ruffled.
Its cawing, the silence breaks.
Dreamy eyes, shut tight.

Dreamy eyes, shut tight.
Dreaming love’s dreams, sublime.
On lips, a smile.

 

Copyright @ Goutam Dutta

https://ronovanwrites.com/category/haiku-prompt-challenge/

Author: gdutta17

Born in the year 1968, my childhood was spent amidst the beautiful scenic landscape of a small town in India, Ranchi. Though an engineer by qualification, reading, writing and cooking are my passions. Another thing that I am passionate about is my country, India. As they say, a lifetime is probably not enough to explore the whole of India. Currently based in Kolkata, I can be reached at gdutta17@gmail.com.

8 thoughts on “#ShiRensaHaiku Dawn”

    1. Thanks so much for going through the Haiku and providing me with your feedback. I have just started writing Haikus and have got absolutely besotted with them. Love the way A Haiku aims to provide that one moment of eternal bliss, something akin to a fragrance that comes with a whiff and then lingers on in the mind for a while. Your comments mean a lot to me. I like the style developed by you; makes it possible to weave together a chain of thoughts in the form of a story, something which I have attempted to do here. Thanks once again. πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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    1. Thank you so much for your appreciation. These help me a lot in understanding the concepts of Haiku writing better and improving my skills. Really appreciate the detailed comment. πŸ˜ŠπŸ™

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